This week we are looking at words which describe nouns... adjectives. We are writing poems using these words!
Today we all wrote about cats...tomorrow we get o choose our own topic!
Here are some awesome efforts from Room 4 poets
Cats
Licking paws
Loud miaowing
Lazy sleeping in the sun
Tall long tails
Cat are all around in my home.
Rebecca
Kittens
Soft and smooth fur
Hissing and scratching
Playing quickly with their toys
Tiny little kittens
I love kittens
Antonia
Kittens
Soft kittens
Cute and fluffy
Sleepy and colourful
Long whiskers
Strong paws
Cries miaow for food or attention
Kittens are strong
They lick their fur slowly
I love kittens
Lorilee
Great poems Rebecca, Antonia and Lorilee. They are very descriptive. Well done.
ReplyDeleteMichelle (Callum's mum) :o)
Hi Rm4
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Andrew Knight :p
great poems! hope to read more. Kelli
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You have 10 to go.
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ATK SC
Great poems girls, I like cats too! Kelli
ReplyDeleteI suggest that room 4 puts more photos on your blog! Kelli
ReplyDeleteDo you have cats/kittens at home girls? we have a cat called Bubbles, she is a very cool cat. Kelli
ReplyDeleteHas anyone written a poem about dogs? Kelli
ReplyDeleteI really like your poems, Riley Bell (Gracies brother)
ReplyDeleteGood morning room 4, hope you have a lovely day. happy learning! Kelli
ReplyDeleteHello Room 4, how was your day? i see you have a lot of comments now! well done. Kelli
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they are kind and helpful little ones
who like to have lots of fun!
your art and writing is great room 4
can wait to see you all do more!
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ReplyDeleteLovely poems. from Grace's Grandpa Jim
ReplyDeletenot good superb WELL DONE GIRLS!!!
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