Sunday, May 29, 2011

Snazzy Sentence Starters!!!

We have been looking at exciting story openings with Ms D.

It was a dark night and I decided to go to the beach. GRACE

One day I was playing with my friend. Rebecca

IT WAS A DARK NIGHT; A BOY CALLED JAMES WAS IN BED. CAMPBELL

ON SUNDAY, I WAS BORED SO I WENT TO THE MUSEUM. CALLUM

IT WAS A DARK NIGHT AND I WAS BORED. KODIE

IT WAS COLD, DARK NIGHT IN A DARK CASTLE. ETHAN

I WAS IN THE DARK SUPERMARKET AND I WAS SCARED. JACK.

IT ALL STARTED WHEN ME, JACK AND BRAYDEN WERE ONE YEARS OLD. DYLAN

I HAD ALWAYS WANTED TO VISIT THE JUNGLE SO MY FAMILY WENT ON A HOLIDAY. ANTONIA

I WAS IN THE CEMETRY. DARRIN

I WAS TRAVELLING DOWN INTO THE SEWERS. ALYSSA

I WAS TRAPPED IN THE HAUNTED CEMERTY. JOSIAH

IT WAS A DARK EVENING SO I DECIDED TO GO FOR A WALK. PAOLO

A PATH LED ME INTO THE CEMETRY. LORILEE



TWO IMPRESSIVE STORIES:

IT WAS A DARK NIGHT AND I DECIDED TO GO TO THE BEACH. I HAD ON SHOES AND SOCKS. IT WAS COLD. I DID NOT HAVE GLOVES ON. MY FEET TOUCHED THE WATER. THE SAND WAS COLD. I DIDN’T HAVE A TORCH.

MY MUM WAS SHOCKED! SHE THOUGHT THAT I HAD BEEN STOLEN. BUT I HADN’T BEEN.

I SAW A SEA LION. I JUST ABOUT GOT CHASED BUT I DID NOT. I WAS AFRAID.

BY GRACE

IT WAS A DARK EVENING SO I DECIDED TO GO FOR A WALK. THERE BEFORE MY EYES WAS A REALLY BIG HAUNTED HOUSE.

I WENT IN AND WALKED UP THE STAIRS. I HAD A BAD FEELING. I KEPT ON GOING WITH A CREAK.

I CAME TO A ROOM THAT HAD ONE PIECE OF FURNITURE. THERE WAS AN OGRE STARING AT ME. I RAN DOWN THE STAIRS AND SHUT THE DOOR BEHIND ME.

I WENT THROUGH THE HALL TO SEE FIVE SILVER KNIGHTS THEN A GATE SHUT BEHIND ME. I WAS TRAPPED! A WAREWOLF RAN AT ME AND BIT ME ON THE SPINE AS I FELL TO THE GROUND IN PAIN.

PAOLO

28 comments:

  1. These are awesome and some sound rather scary. I loved your stories Grace and Paolo. I wonder what happened after you fell to the ground in pain?????
    Michelle (Callum's mum) :o)

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  2. I love these - but I wish I'd helped you to spell cemetry/cemetrey - neither of these are correct - do you know the correct spelling?? I wonder who will be the first to tell me and win the marshmallows???
    Ms. D x

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  3. fantastic story Grace Bell! Kelli Bell

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  4. the correct spelling is cemetery. From Grace Bell

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  5. Its cemetery. Grace Bell

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  6. Great sentence starters! you are amazing writers room 4! Kelli Bell

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  7. Thank goodness you weren't stolen Grace! I would have been scared! Kelli

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  8. Fantastic stories Grace and Paolo! you are amazing writers! Kelli

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  9. Any of you thought about being writers when you grow up? Kelli

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  10. I love reading your blog. would love to see more things on it. Kelli

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  11. fantastic writing room 4. Jimmy Bell (Gracie's Dad)

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  12. No spelling mistakes Grace! well done! Kelli

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  13. I have left lots of comments! Kelli

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  14. Great story Grace. I'm so proud of you.
    Love Granny.

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  15. What a super story Grace Bell! from Aunty M

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  16. fantastic story starters room 4. From Gracie's Aunty Tracey

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  17. wow! what wonderful story starters! from Sasha Bennett ( Grace's Aunty)

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  18. What a great story Grace Bell! you are a good writer. From Lish Dunn ( Grace's Aunty)

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  19. Really good story starters room 4 and Miss Grace. From Aunty Julie (AKA Julie Costello)

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  20. nice work room 4 and Grace. from Aunty Nee Nee (Evangeline Marsh)

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  21. Good story Grace, from Uncle Chris (Chris Dunn)

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  22. Very nice story starters room 4 and Grace Bell. from Pam Robertson (Granny's friend)

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  23. Great story Grace. from Aunty Vicky

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  24. Wonderful story Grace. You have some very talented children in your class. I love your blog. I get to see what you are doing all the way from Australia! Aunty J and Piper xxx

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  25. great story Grace, thank goodness you didn't get stolen! have a fun day, from Jo (from your Mums work)

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  26. Really exciting story starters room 4. fantastic story Grace. from Kelly Bathgate

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  27. Grace your story is really good. You are a very brave girl. from Daniel

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  28. I agree on
    the title guys are a fantastic class!from Bethany in room5!

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