We have been looking at exciting story openings with Ms D.
It was a dark night and I decided to go to the beach. GRACE
One day I was playing with my friend. Rebecca
IT WAS A DARK NIGHT; A BOY CALLED JAMES WAS IN BED. CAMPBELL
ON SUNDAY, I WAS BORED SO I WENT TO THE MUSEUM. CALLUM
IT WAS A DARK NIGHT AND I WAS BORED. KODIE
IT WAS COLD, DARK NIGHT IN A DARK CASTLE. ETHAN
I WAS IN THE DARK SUPERMARKET AND I WAS SCARED. JACK.
IT ALL STARTED WHEN ME, JACK AND BRAYDEN WERE ONE YEARS OLD. DYLAN
I HAD ALWAYS WANTED TO VISIT THE JUNGLE SO MY FAMILY WENT ON A HOLIDAY. ANTONIA
I WAS IN THE CEMETRY. DARRIN
I WAS TRAVELLING DOWN INTO THE SEWERS. ALYSSA
I WAS TRAPPED IN THE HAUNTED CEMERTY. JOSIAH
IT WAS A DARK EVENING SO I DECIDED TO GO FOR A WALK. PAOLO
A PATH LED ME INTO THE CEMETRY. LORILEE
TWO IMPRESSIVE STORIES:
IT WAS A DARK NIGHT AND I DECIDED TO GO TO THE BEACH. I HAD ON SHOES AND SOCKS. IT WAS COLD. I DID NOT HAVE GLOVES ON. MY FEET TOUCHED THE WATER. THE SAND WAS COLD. I DIDN’T HAVE A TORCH.
MY MUM WAS SHOCKED! SHE THOUGHT THAT I HAD BEEN STOLEN. BUT I HADN’T BEEN.
I SAW A SEA LION. I JUST ABOUT GOT CHASED BUT I DID NOT. I WAS AFRAID.
BY GRACE
IT WAS A DARK EVENING SO I DECIDED TO GO FOR A WALK. THERE BEFORE MY EYES WAS A REALLY BIG HAUNTED HOUSE.
I WENT IN AND WALKED UP THE STAIRS. I HAD A BAD FEELING. I KEPT ON GOING WITH A CREAK.
I CAME TO A ROOM THAT HAD ONE PIECE OF FURNITURE. THERE WAS AN OGRE STARING AT ME. I RAN DOWN THE STAIRS AND SHUT THE DOOR BEHIND ME.
I WENT THROUGH THE HALL TO SEE FIVE SILVER KNIGHTS THEN A GATE SHUT BEHIND ME. I WAS TRAPPED! A WAREWOLF RAN AT ME AND BIT ME ON THE SPINE AS I FELL TO THE GROUND IN PAIN.
PAOLO
These are awesome and some sound rather scary. I loved your stories Grace and Paolo. I wonder what happened after you fell to the ground in pain?????
ReplyDeleteMichelle (Callum's mum) :o)
I love these - but I wish I'd helped you to spell cemetry/cemetrey - neither of these are correct - do you know the correct spelling?? I wonder who will be the first to tell me and win the marshmallows???
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fantastic story Grace Bell! Kelli Bell
ReplyDeletethe correct spelling is cemetery. From Grace Bell
ReplyDeleteIts cemetery. Grace Bell
ReplyDeleteGreat sentence starters! you are amazing writers room 4! Kelli Bell
ReplyDeleteThank goodness you weren't stolen Grace! I would have been scared! Kelli
ReplyDeleteFantastic stories Grace and Paolo! you are amazing writers! Kelli
ReplyDeleteAny of you thought about being writers when you grow up? Kelli
ReplyDeleteI love reading your blog. would love to see more things on it. Kelli
ReplyDeletefantastic writing room 4. Jimmy Bell (Gracie's Dad)
ReplyDeleteNo spelling mistakes Grace! well done! Kelli
ReplyDeleteI have left lots of comments! Kelli
ReplyDeleteGreat story Grace. I'm so proud of you.
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What a super story Grace Bell! from Aunty M
ReplyDeletefantastic story starters room 4. From Gracie's Aunty Tracey
ReplyDeletewow! what wonderful story starters! from Sasha Bennett ( Grace's Aunty)
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story Grace Bell! you are a good writer. From Lish Dunn ( Grace's Aunty)
ReplyDeleteReally good story starters room 4 and Miss Grace. From Aunty Julie (AKA Julie Costello)
ReplyDeletenice work room 4 and Grace. from Aunty Nee Nee (Evangeline Marsh)
ReplyDeleteGood story Grace, from Uncle Chris (Chris Dunn)
ReplyDeleteVery nice story starters room 4 and Grace Bell. from Pam Robertson (Granny's friend)
ReplyDeleteGreat story Grace. from Aunty Vicky
ReplyDeleteWonderful story Grace. You have some very talented children in your class. I love your blog. I get to see what you are doing all the way from Australia! Aunty J and Piper xxx
ReplyDeletegreat story Grace, thank goodness you didn't get stolen! have a fun day, from Jo (from your Mums work)
ReplyDeleteReally exciting story starters room 4. fantastic story Grace. from Kelly Bathgate
ReplyDeleteGrace your story is really good. You are a very brave girl. from Daniel
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ReplyDeletethe title guys are a fantastic class!from Bethany in room5!